FarFromSundown's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ocean World]

starts out slow

but picks up nicely. I think it's a bit long in the beginning (34 seconds to be exact). If I wasn't patient I would've never listened to the whole thing. I actually fastforward it a little bit to see if anything else cool was coming. I'm glad I did that because once it picks up, it's a really nice submission. So my advice would be maybe make the intro a little shorter?

Either way, you did a good job on this. I'll check out your "Forest World" in a second.

Aaroca responds:

Well, I'm glad you like it!

Later-Bye!
-Aaroca-

[Pieces of you]

not too bad

I really like the vocals in this song. Very relaxing and fits the mood of the music. Great job.

poormansdream responds:

Thank-ya sire:)

[War Is Near (unfinished)]

pretty epic

really good work. I do wish you'd finish it, but for what it's worth, what you have here is outstanding.

AudioVision responds:

Thanks! I probably will finish it at some point.

[Retained]

cool

I don't know if I'd classify/compare it to Slipknot considering the tone of it doesn't sound anything like them. But not a bad submission anyway. Great job and as far as lyrics go, I think you just have to sit down and really think about what kind of feel you get when you listen to the song and what cadence the lyrics should be sung in. That's what I do when I write my music. Just a thought.

demonunitband responds:

Dude thanks alot.... that means alot from you... from anyone...

it was a lot of work for a 12 yr old boy...lol

[_Revolution_]

not too bad

The EQ sounded alright to me. I can't make any suggestions on what to change. Musically I think you did a good job as well. I like the transistions from phrase to phrase.

Birdinator99 responds:

Sweet -- thanks man!

[JTE-Metaljonus]

badass!

I really like this. You BOTH have some talent here and it shines!

Metaljonus responds:

Thx!

[Flight In Dispair]

needs more bass

the guitar work is fine, I really like the feel of it. but the drummers kick pedal needs to be "bassier", lol. I want my heart pounding when I hear that double bass not think of it as a snare hit. Good music though.

4/5 - 8/10

SteMoney responds:

Thank you and about the drums, I'm not trying to say it is this... But it might be your speakers. They sound bassy on mine and in the car. Plus you don't want too much bass or reverb in songs otherwise it drowns out the guitar and synth work.

[HW - Logic]

Not bad

If this is your first attempt, I think you did a pretty decent job. A pretty solid beat with some cool effects in the background = awesome in my eyes. I really liked the breakdown at the :43 mark. 4/5 and 9/10

haywirehaywire responds:

thanks a lot thats actually my favorite part too haha

[Phantom Hourglass Intro Remake]

very good job!

excellent job on this. You really captured the feel to the Zelda games. I commend you for that.

djresset responds:

Thanks

[-Sector11]

GREAT!

This was a really cool track to listen to. I couldn't pick it apart or think of anything that might need improvement. Overall, this is a really cool style.

MashedByMachines responds:

Thanks alot! :D glad you liked it :)